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If its a slow suicide
then baby Im sliding in.
these cold waters that I felt
babe Im here again.

If its a slow suicide
well my heart dont seem to care
cause when it comes to your sweet loving
baby I'm back to pay the fare.

If its a slow suicide I can barely stay a float
this ship that's at your harbor
I can feel my walls come crashing through.

yeah if its a slow suicide
I know your love has capsized me
cause them cold deep waters
I've felt so many times before.

well' if its a slow suicide
I guess I better dive on in
cause that would be better
then the way it has been,
with each time you leave
my heart you take out that door.

If its slow suicide
baby its all I can do to make it through
when I think that you dont love me any more.
If its slow suicide
then baby I've died again.


------
CoCo


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by coco

Suicide
CoCo;
This is an interesting song...but I liked it quite the same...You have that "spark" about yourself...keep em' comin'.


Blessings,
{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: August 25, 2004 )

this one is easy
Suicide #1 Pernod and Campari
Suicide #2 Vodka, lime liqueur and club soda
Southern Suicide: Jack Daniels, Southern Comfort, Orange juice, 7-Up, Grenadine

when I drink any one of these, or all together, I forget their name and the poetry fits the music.

( Posted by: teflon [Member] On: August 26, 2004 )

Sloe... Right here:
Sloe Screw: Sloe gin, Southern Comfort, Vodka, Orange juice,
OR: Sloe gin, Southern Comfort, Orange juice, Galliano, Cherry

Come on, someone do a rhyme on drink names please

( Posted by: Teflon [Member] On: August 26, 2004 )

OK
My devotion is cronic
You know I'm not ironic
Everything's harmonic
When I pour the tonic

Oh, a margarita
That's la dolce vita
When I twist the fibre
I drink a Cuba Libre

(my god, what have you made me done?)




( Posted by: shapeshifter [Member] On: August 26, 2004 )

Good grog! It's good!
Cuba Libre: Light rum, Lime, Coca-Cola
The Real Cuba Libre: Ice, Lime, Rum, Coca-Cola

Very artful of ya.

( Posted by: Teflon [Member] On: August 26, 2004 )

blow me tembers
welp ..have to laugh,about these comments,,the water over flows the glass,
didnt expect so many comments about it I suppose, Just shop talk,, things I wrote sometime ago,,,good grief I have over two hundred.....I like soda pop the bubbles tickle my throat....mixed drinks make my head hurt,and deepen my already drenched soul,,, I get high on a laugh,and writing a useful vent..
when I take the time to read what I write, I sound like a tree frog clinging to a limb, which sways gracifully to music of others minded to come out for a swim in classical stream on a dark cloudy night..the moon full blown, yellow sets the stage...what a wonderous sight.
A Howling wolf tembers the side of mountains,as small furry creators drink peacefully...fawnly remember, ALL of ME.
rascals

( Posted by: coco [Member] On: August 27, 2004 )





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