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Poem Felicitating President W. Bush (JR) and her
Citizenry.

IF AMERICA HAD FELL
All yea lovers of America
Hem! if America had fallen
Though other great countries fell
In medieval era
But if America had fallen!
Whose concern is to repeal the inhumane of mankind –Who implements evil strategies for a fellow.

America whose beauty shines like an embrayo-without sin, and Incorruptible!
While she smiles coming for fulfillment
As she controls her welfare
So she controls the big macrocosm, abrogating
corruption, and dividitude
Inculcating transparency, accountability, humane and equity.

Oh, if America had fallen
Other world would have ruled the world
Men who wished trading at night than day
Men who thought oppressed – to gain power
And those laughing would turn into wailing
While those wailing would turn into laughing
Many men would have turned women in refuge
While women catch men in fury.

O, who’s uncomfortabling America?
America whose justice the world emulates
With love and acclamations.

If American had fallen!
A dead lion would have been more precious
Than a living dog-And those who gave
A bad name to a dog in other to hang him
Would regret and have no peace from when
America would rise to fight evil men
Men of living-under world; the living corpse.

Cudos verily to Mr. W. Bush (JR) – president
And Britain and all nations
Whose efforts the culprits Ran.
One Day all the followers of America
Shall pay thanks to their God who concepted
How America saves them from eleventh day
Of September two thousand and one year.


If America Had Fallen,
Then I wonder the fate of the yahoo!
Despoil of our glory would stand in mount Everest
While our tears make an ocean like missisippi
Trumpets would not again heard in Christ houses.

Oh, thank you God for saving us in this menace
Of uncultured habits of men;thank you Papa!





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God bless all writers for they are the image of God.

When you insult a writer, you'er not doing the best for him.But when you correct him, you're a good friend.
Cheers !

Odimegwu Onwumere


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The following comments are for "Thank God"
by Princeo

Is this a joke?
I can't believe I'm actually wasting precious seconds of my life typing this in response to the above drivel. What is this anyway? Someone please tell me.

( Posted by: Odysseus [Member] On: August 27, 2004 )





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