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Did you think it could be?
That everything will go your way?
What you want it to be
What you not want it to be
What you want to be me
What you not want to be me
Now u see I'm not the one u dream
In your sleep
What you thought is warm is but running cold
What you thought is strong is fading away
What you thought is binding my finger is
Loosing grip
What you thought is
What you thought not
What you thought about us
What you thought not about us
But you will not wake from sweet dreams
You fastened the knots
Locked me away from others
And told yourself
"this beauty will not run from me!"

I am but gone



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The following comments are for "Denial"
by ^white

thank you!
thank you! i appreciate that! i will try to take note of it! :)

( Posted by: ^white [Member] On: November 12, 2004 )





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