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This piece isn't any particular category of poetry other then rhyming...


Im the piece of your needs-
I'm the rage when your firey-
Like alicia keys-
Im the page of your diary-

Im the keeper of secrets-
and when it gets cold-
when speaking is needless-
Im the pen that you hold-

Im the light that you stare at-
when darkness surrounds you-
Im the sprite of your blared laugh-
when friends are around you-

Im the spring that has wound you-
Im the sound of your joy-
Im the one who sticks around-
when your down and destroyed-

Im the suns rays-
Im the breeze as it whispers-
Im your sundays-
Im the ease that you wish for-
The sound of your piano-
the keys are just crisper-

Im the mirror of your refelction-
Im the light to your eyes-
your nearer to perfection-
Im the night to your skies-

Im the Spur of your giggle-
and Im the joke when you wont laugh-
Im the words that you scribble-
and Im the friend that you dont have-


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by Essence

I'm The. . .
A beautiful flowing work of art. Nicely rhymed and pleasing to read. A true heart of a friend and partner. Well done. ~Pam

( Posted by: PamelaALamppa [Member] On: August 22, 2004 )





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