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Pick me a flower.....sometime
they grow all over the place.

Take your hand and gently brush
a strand of hair from my face.

Put your arm around me
as we watch and feed the birds.

Don't tell me you love me and not show it
Actions Speak Louder Than Words.

Treat me with respect in public
and when we are alone.

If you have to be away from me
you could call me on the phone.

If I have an opinion about something
don't prentend you haven't heard.

Dont tell me you love me and not show it
Actions Speak Louder Than Words.





------
Kacee Huggs


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The following comments are for "Actions Speak Louder Than Words"
by Nitz Kitty

Actions speak louder than words
I like this poem very much, I think has so much sentiment and emotion. The structure of it was also good.
Ciao x

( Posted by: BabyPink [Member] On: August 25, 2004 )

Chapter 1, Stephanie, and Tina
Chapter 1...I always appreciate your reading my poetry and rating it.
Stephanie and Tina...Thank you for reading my work..this is one of my older pieces written when I was going through a divorce...Some of my poems are funny...I like them better...but I do have my moments when I feel like spouting off...If you read more of mine...please let me know how you like them...and even if you don't ...I would like to know...so I can better myself and my writing....thanks again to all...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: August 25, 2004 )

Lucie
I read that book after I was divorced....I recently bought it from the library in town....maybe it will help if there is a next time..I was married to a what's in it for me guy....wouldn't do anything for you unless he was repaid...There was a price for every nice thing he ever did...which were few wnd far between...so I don't think that book would have worked for us...as I was the only one working to keep the marriage together (the duct tape lost it's glue after 28 years)...I got tired...thanks for reading my poem and the comment...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: August 25, 2004 )

Welcome Back NitzKitty
Nice to have you back on the set...And you came back with a "Bang em up" I loved this Kitty...loved your couplets here...

Thanks for an excellent read, and welcome back.

Blessings,
{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: August 25, 2004 )

Jeannie
Thanks for your comment and rating...it's good to be back....
I love your writing...at times your poems convict me and bring me to tears...you help keep me in line with the Lord...thanks...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: August 25, 2004 )

Nice...
Kitty,

Nice job...Keep writing and posting.liked your couplets here...Keep up the good work.

Bye,

GSVK

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: August 26, 2004 )

Thank you G.S.
For the encouraging comment and rating...They are very much appreciated.
Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: August 26, 2004 )

True and to the point
My strongest belief is what you have written here Nitz. I love this quote I want to share with you, "I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel." Maya Angelou said as she was interviewed by Oprah.

This is so true. For even in any negative moods the love, respect should be shown in actions.

Thanks for sharing this, it's nice to see you back. I have read but sorrily not had time to comment Nitz...welcome home!!!

Megwetch,
Darlene

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: August 26, 2004 )

Darlene
Thank you so much for the comment and rating.
I sure hope I can make people feel good about themselves and help someone get through bad times by making them laugh at some of my poetry...I have written all kinds but I like the ones that make me laugh ..the best...cause ...I'd rather be laughing...we don't realize what an impact we have on other's lives....people that I would never think would remember me do and thank God it is for the nice things they say I've done (to tell you the truth, I don't even remember what I did or said to impact their lives) Like this one time, a new girl at school thanked me for being the only one to make her feel welcome . I always try to treat people the way I would like to be treated...oops...that's the Golden Rule ...isn't it?
I also wanted to tell you ...I like your poems...just haven't been commenting like I should...Blessings...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: August 26, 2004 )





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