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I'm sick of doing my best for other people!
I'm sick of smiling when I'm sad!
I'm sick of listening when I'm mad!
I'm sick of making up story's when I'm quiet!
I'm sick of you telling me that i should go on a diet!
I'm sick of promises you can't keep!
I'm sick of you hurting me very deep!
now leave me alone, so I can be on my own!

you said i don't look sick?! well it's not
on the outside that i'm sick it's on the inside!!

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the nice girl_tabita_(tha~belgium~chick)


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The following comments are for "sick of..."
by tabita

Well you told 'em
I am sad if this is true for you tabita. Maybe writing will go some way to getting better. Then I look forward to seeing some poetry from the well, real you. You say what a lot of people feel tho', they look well outside but no one can see how much they hurt inside. wishing you well, huni.

( Posted by: huni [Member] On: August 24, 2004 )

Sick of....
Hey, This poem seems so very real and emotional, I think many people could relate to this and it helps that you share it with the people who are too scared to talk about this subject.
Ciao x

( Posted by: BabyPink [Member] On: August 24, 2004 )

Sick
This sounds like a child's temper tantrum, like someone going through the growing pains of independence, thinking nobody understands and they know everything. For me it doesn't resonate as poetry. Maybe it could be expanded as a rant though.

( Posted by: Odysseus [Member] On: August 24, 2004 )

hi
tnx for your comments!!!I was angry and depressed when i writed this "poem" but I don't like this one I just writed what i felt!!I'm better now really!!!bye thanks again!!!kisses xxx)tabita(xxx

( Posted by: tabita [Member] On: August 26, 2004 )





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