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She was walking in the sun
In the middle of the night
suddenly she saw a man
when she closed her eyes
he took her and she started to scream
with no sounds coming out of her mounth
he tooked her to a strange place
a place that was called his house
what was the man going to do?
he tooked her in a room a strange room
with no windows she was scared
than suddenly she realised that the man
was her father and he tooked her home

the nice girl_tabita_(tha~belgium~chick)

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