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Something is clotting up in my brain
Something is eating up the memories i kept
Something is comsuming me
Something is dissolving the colours i see
Something is taking over me

The devil devours me

Someone is searching for me
Someone is digging for me
Someone is looking at me
Someone is watching me die
Someone is burying me

The devil devours me

I am shattering into pieces
I am bleeding flood of blood
I am decomposing with the corpses
I am disintegrating into dust
I am stolen

The devil devours me

He has a plate of scrumptious flesh
He has my blood kept warm to drink
He has my tears he delights at
He has my scars of heartbreaks
He has my loneliness

The devil devours me

I am the perfect companion
for eternity, he shall keep
to feed on
to satisfy his hunger

I am his mistress



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by ^white

thx!
thx so much for e compliments!

( Posted by: ^white [Member] On: August 22, 2004 )





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