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I need you to care.
I hope for you to listen.
Come on back to me i'll show you what you've been missin.

Can't you remeber how it used to be?
Endless conversations you were always 100% behind me.
But now you don't seem care.

I wish i could find you, but where ever i like your not there.
Ive looked into many eyes many hearts,
but never did i find one just like yours.

Now when ever crying my hopes are down,
I look for you help, but its no where to be found.


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