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I learned in the house of cards
that nobody dies, they just move
from one home to another.
You must remain very very quiet
if you are to see clearly.
You must go to the place
where there are no spoken words
if you want to see the world
as it wants to be.


------
Love at all times!


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The following comments are for "House of Cards"
by Lionel Gizik

House of Cards
Lionel,

An intriguing piece, thqat makes you think. A subject close to my heart (see my post 'Moving House'}.

I like this way you carry the reader with you in this one. I love poetry that reminds people that most answers are within themselves.

Well Done, thank you,

Ivor

( Posted by: ivordavies [Member] On: August 20, 2004 )





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