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I feel irresponsible towards the actions I’ve committed,
towards any damage I may have caused
but I still want to find myself in you
reach out and touch your soul with icy cold fingers,
find piece of mind in a piece of shit like you
and though it seems far away sometimes you want it to stay
if you love it, it leaves you
see it, it beats you
I’ve lost you in several oceans
where the fuck are your emotions
I’ve lost you in several skies
what are you without your disguise?
I see nothing’s working but how would things work out?
I know apathy’s your strongest characteristic
your apathy’s killing me
every smile from you was like a lie you were willing to let me know
when I touched you, you were cold and empty
and I was just waiting for the day
when you’d let everything collapse
your apathy’s killing me


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