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In the field of scorn

naked and in cloth wrapped

sadness was standing

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The following comments are for "In the field of scorn"
by ursus

ursus
I'm off to read your other poetry!! I cannot believe I have not come across it before, another very powerful image! I think just about everyone can relate to this.

Alex :-)

( Posted by: londongrey [Member] On: August 22, 2004 )





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