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Night time.
My favorite time.
Not a sound except for the buzzing of street lights
and the insects around them.
The cool night breeze caresses my face and comforts me.
I think it understands my pain.
It know what I am thinking and seems to say,
"I see you, I need you, I love you."


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The following comments are for "It Knows"
by Prissy

it knows
night time is my favorite too, nicely written, the only mistake i noticed was "it know, the 7th line" other than that it's nice. winter nights are what i like to be specific.

( Posted by: seniorme [Member] On: August 20, 2004 )





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