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I know I remember everything in the deep dark abyss of my mind
I just can't consciencely seem to remember
So you must talk to my sub-concious to seek what you must find
You have to contact my very essence to find what I remember.

I know for you to pull the secrets from my very soul is a hard thing to do
But this you must do so I can stop the madness and murder by this poor pitiful fiend
I must remember so for this I must swim the pools of my memory to recall things for you
The killer in question I think is the worst ever seen.

Basic memory is not hard for me, but it seems I blacked out what I saw in my conscience mind,see
For me to remember what this person did we must reach the very inner being of my mind
All my deep dark secrets you will find here, see
This makes me feel uncomfortable, so I hope you are fast to achieve what you must find.

Hypnotize me! Let's get this thing over and done with
You darken the room and softly start speaking to me
I feel myself slipping away, I can't resist as you suggest to me drift deeper
Into the crevasse of my mind deeper like into total oblivion, see.

I feel as if I'm falling nothing around to hold on to
You start asking me questions and the answers I give you must and have to be true
You tell me to remember what I see or who
I have to honestly answer, I can't fight this thing " I did the killing. I am the sick fiend you seek. Under hypnosis my confession has to be true.

Lanaia Lee

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