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Dareva , Dareva
golden high lights in your
hair,
Dareva, the answer
to a good man's prayer.

Dancing under the moon
light night,
Dareva's eyes still shines
in the mist of blue,
a candle in her hand
the Lady of Grace
Dareva, saving
sailing sailors through
oceans faced without
you,
compared to you
all others can
not prevail,
mermaids long
drenched in
wine with song,
by your knowledge
of what is true.


A passion of mystery
that covers everything
when the lights go out,
the pleasure in knowing
what Dareva is all about
is always something new,

Dareva, Dareva
someone who doesn't
have you,
hasn't a clue
how far the stars
do shine.

The mystery that Dareva
unvails hold answers
to the talk of everything
written on the wall.

A cherry blossom falls
so tenderly
at the end of spring
after summer calls
and through it all
you are left standing,
and still have the
heart to understanding
your brown eyes make
many men sing,
like a night-in-gale.

Dareva, Dareva
a soft whisper
by the start of
Septemeber,
brushing tenderly
through the leaves.

Dareva, Dareva
holds so innocently
a woman's
answer to many
things,
Giving back the
young man's
voice to sing
as the young
girl dances
to her name.

Dareva,
no other woman
could ever do,
with a heart that
would out shine you.

Oh, Dareva,
someone is always
missing you,
the beauty to the
truth.



------
CoCo


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The following comments are for "DAREVA, DAREVA"
by CoCo

again...
you're a very accomplished poet. your imagery is deft and sure. you surely have a future in this genre.

( Posted by: nameless [Member] On: August 22, 2004 )

nameless
thanks, you made me smile By your uid name alone.....but your comment was more than sweet,,,you got it going on with the type writing you send, as well,,and I would gladly .bet ,more of a pro than myself by far,

( Posted by: coco [Member] On: August 24, 2004 )

nameless
Dareva,, was my contribution, to dareva on here, she like the statue of grace over the waters of New York ,,,her writings amaze me, and always, always encourage me that there are ppl. out there that remain sweet as mulberry wine, no matter what WHERE it counts,,,in their hearts.......

( Posted by: coco [Member] On: August 24, 2004 )

Oh, WOW, Coco, ME?!?
I am sitting with misty eyes anyway. Not up to being here, but this has surely touched my heart, and is by far the best Get Well gift Coco. I am going to have to make sure I print this out.
Much more, this name Dareva, is mine, Darlene and joined with my bio mother's name, Eva. So seeing that joined together this day, CoCo is very touching and special.
Perhaps there is peace and true happiness somewhere out there. I know it is a step closer when I read truth in people's words, whom I have never met, personally, but we have connected somehow. Thank you SO very much for this Dear Lady. You will never know how much it means to me to have something written like this, for me, about me.

With heartfelt appreciation,

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: August 24, 2004 )

coco
poetry is one of the hardest genres to get 'right'. I've struggled many years and in my 'poetry' it shows that there is a struggle, and thus far, it's been a battle lost. Your poetry flows sure and quick like a newly formed river. There is no struggle and because there is no struggle there is joy in every word. You, Coco, are a true talent. I might not be able to write poetry myself, but I can instantly spot when someone has done it right. And you have done it right.

I have so few gifts to give, please accept this small one and go forth with a light step, knowing you have made good on your talent.

( Posted by: nameless [Member] On: August 25, 2004 )

Nameless, Nameless
One can only hope to be the inspiration of such talent, can't one? lol

( Posted by: nameless [Member] On: August 25, 2004 )

blameless ,nameless
No one is truly completely blameless,,when it doesnt work out, who we chose to see sometimes clouds the way of choosing......the hard road to making it stick is the chose of seeing what in our own life and wants fits....Yes its always nice to know that when its over we did our best,there we can rest on the shoulder that God is our vent, for happiness and sorrow,He made us women for a reason, sensitive ,not to be abused but to keep all other steps in line,with what he is,,,we can put on the prettiest dress and make up our face,but without seeking God's order in life it will never last,beauty of the skin never was meant to,its just the over coat for the elements of life,,Dareva not only is pretty outside,,her natural beauty will never fade,,and a true man ,,,not a pretend...will see that....when we are willing to walk with God alone,,,he being the groom of our life,,he will make sure we find someone we are Yoked equal too,that doesnt mean there will never be times for lessons learned,,the Key to the chains of life,,is seek what means the most to me,to Loving God who always loved me and like a parent should be ,unconditionally?,,,to soften my path as I go down life's highway, dont throw more stones than I can pick up on my way back.and what am I leaving behind for my loved ones to walk through.......we cant make people react like we hope them to,but we can leave a mark as to where we are going.Dont make hasty vows, love your neighbor as yourself,,now I dont know about you but, I know thats hard,,to see that things Ive done he still loved me,,then I think who am I to ever denie someone the grace of pardon me,doesnt mean I AM VELCRO,stuck to more hurt if its against the word of God, but bow out graceful,WHEN he says move on. I know a time in my life I wanted revenge,but even Christ didnt come to do that,he came to save us from our own destruction, from the beginning God had a plan,even for me....he never walked away, I let go of his hand.......what many men dont know to Honor God you by his law have to love and honor that woman as Christ does the church, a temple of Joy to be near,seeking to go there to praise,
and we as women,,know who should always Be seated at the table, the LORD first,who leads a true men....cant be a true christian without keeping the laws of the Bible our goal,Not just the ones that feel comfortable. There is a big difference in slipping and jumping off....If I slip, it sends a reaction,that startles me, if I jumped I had no fear of anything.Who's going to save me?

( Posted by: coco [Member] On: August 25, 2004 )

tinalouise
thanks Tina, such sweet words, from you, yes truly I do know what youre saying not enough time to do what we would like, I have checked out some of your writes as well,saw that you were a pro ,on here, and admired your style,I know youre tickled to be back.. I was shocked with all you have to do and take time for you could have spotted my dot,on the big white canvas,thank you,,*****

( Posted by: coco [Member] On: August 27, 2004 )





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