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In my mind I can't resist the grasp of temptation
The temptation after I submit to it, the act I committed fills my entire being with guilt
The guilt runs rampant, but there is nothing I can do after everything done everything said
The temptation has caused a monster to be built.

This awful thing totally consumes me, mind, body, and soul
I look into a mirror and ask myself is this person I see really me?
Some of the things I remember I have done makes me want to run and hide in some deep dark hole
The grasp of this thing is so intense, no way I can turn and flee
My monster, as I call it, has touched many lives and believe you me they paid a tremendous toll.

I try and get away but the awful thing always catches me
At the most unusual times temptation grasps me with a lust for death
I do horrid unspeakable things to people I don't even know, see
My morbid self loves to watch people as they take their last breath.

My monster makes me do horrid awful things, even kill
The things I have done, I even have trouble admitting then to myself
I do monstrous things to others against their will
I have killed many times, see, my mind is not in the best of health.

I don't want to do what the monster forces me to do
If anyone comes in contact with me, my advice to them would be from me to deter
When I kill it doesn't matter to me what, where, or who
See my friends, my monster makes me your friendly neighborhood serial killer.

Lanaia Lee

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