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A boy at the pool

Splashing out his happiness

Dreaming of battle




A boy in the pool

Tainting the water in red

Nightmare of battle

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Playing is the most important thing life...


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The following comments are for "Warboys"
by ursus

ursus....
These are very strong, wonderful imagery and a powerful message.

Thank you for sharing.

Alex

( Posted by: londongrey [Member] On: August 22, 2004 )





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