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My brother is a pain,
he causes every migrain.
When he talks in a weird voice,
he's definately not my #1 choice.
He sings really strange,
he's still annoying at a long-range.
I'm at the bitter end,
when he hangs out with my friend.
My parents don't care,
I think it's not fair.
When ever I want to play alone,
he disturbs me,and well, it becomes a war zone.
I can't just ignore,
So I'll have to settle for a civilwar.

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The following comments are for "My Brother,The Pain"
by SkAtEbOaRdEr1355

i second that sentiment
Nice poem, I liked the rhyming(though it got last in the last couple of lines)and somehow that is also a perfect capture of MY brother, every single detail relates. You have my sympathies.

( Posted by: Furius [Member] On: March 28, 2002 )

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