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I will not settle for less than number one in your heart my friend.
Did you know what?
As the sea takes in as many victims as it may, I will always wash up on your shore, my friend.
I will not settle for less that first place in your heart my friend.
Do you know that?
As the sun may set across the sea, look at the moon and think of me
through every path I shall follow
to even where the sea may swallow
your passenger on the road of life,
I will always love you, my friend, know that.
I’ll be your crutch during pain and your crying shoulder as well,
ask god to save you should you go to hell.
As the sea may change and the sand may fall,
I will always hold on.
Through violent waves and gasping breaths,
I will always wash up on your shore

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-RanE-
DEATH IS OUR ONLY SALVATION


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The following comments are for ""debris""
by viewsocruel

debris
wow!! I like this one alot. It is kind and loving yet a touch "stalkerish" at the same time. Maybe "obsessed" is a better word. Very cool...

( Posted by: arc [Member] On: August 20, 2004 )

Great Job,,,
I enjoyed this alot and liked the way you wrapped it up with those last 2 lines. Greatly done!!

Darlene

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: August 20, 2004 )





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