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It's hard to feel ignored
when you're on the center stage
& It's hard to feel so young
when your face is worn with age

when my mind is skipping channels
and clear emotions are but a dream
It's now that Im realizing
that I am not what I seem

It's hard to feel abused
when everyone's envying you
and It's hard to feel fortunate
when you find you're trapped in truth

When my thoughts are sending messages
to everyone but me
It's now that I'm realizing
that I am not what I seem

please don't try to fix me
because you'll only grow more perturbed
with the way I go about this
my actions may come as absurd

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