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What the hell happened today? How did I get here? I thought I found answers here, but I found more questions.

I thought my pain was because of recent loss, but I'm realizing that loss was always there. I just lived through it and found a way to be at peace with it. Maybe it's not loss of self I'm suffering from, maybe it's loss of peace.

I keep turning down alleyways, but I still can't find the way out. Some of these alleys are littered with broken dreams and broken hearts, others are tangled webs of torment and angst. I have yet to find one that affords an easy journey. I see a light at the end of every alley, but the battles that need to be fought to welcome the light are too overwhelming.

My armour is tarnished and my sword is bent.

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