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how about the press upon the chest
for errands outstanding
the smell of decay in the room
time running backwards but only for seconds

(how many times have I had sex by running water
how many times have I slept outside)

and the future now, how the thing breathes
between us when the phone doesnft ring
and I admit ifm waiting.


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I'd rather have permanent employment than be called fascinating


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