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Listen
to the wise sea,
this elder place, engraved
on our bones... so like mapping waves
is life






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MKL

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"I place these moments in my pocket
to be pulled
at the rush of noon,
the crush of three...
when tears come,
when words must learn to be enough..." MKL


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The following comments are for "Mapping Waves ~A Cinquain~"
by Serenem

mapping waves
True, so, so, so almost unbearably true, and eloqently written. Well done!

( Posted by: mzjen1 [Member] On: August 14, 2004 )

mapping waves


Mzjen, Wow, that's wonderful praise-- Thank you so, so, so much!

~smile~

Seriously, I'm honored...

Regards,

Melinda

( Posted by: Serenem [Member] On: August 15, 2004 )

mapping waves....
I love short little piece that have a profound sense, they can leave so much with the reader to get mentally chewing on.

One of my favourite past times is using water as a poetic tool, and you did it brilliantly.

Alex :-)

( Posted by: londongrey [Member] On: August 16, 2004 )

Londongrey, waves
Thank you so much for reading and commenting on this cinquain, Alex; I'm thrilled that you like it!

I use a lot of ocean imagery in my poetry, as well. The sea has a lot of meaning for me.

Thanks for coming around!

Melinda

( Posted by: Serenem [Member] On: August 16, 2004 )

Sea
Ocean imagery is indeed beautiful, as your cinquain. Well written.

( Posted by: Cryptic Rapture [Member] On: August 16, 2004 )

Cryptic Rapture, windchime
Thank you both for commenting on this cinquain, I appreciate it!

Melinda

( Posted by: Serenem [Member] On: August 22, 2004 )





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