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Some law of physics says swift celeration
- it does not matter if its de- or ac --
will cause a splatter of dissemination
on ev`ry liquid; I would like to check
this gem of info that came to my mind
while riding in a tram to Monday shift
where others share with me a ditto bind
drowned eyes hang over faces, thoughts adrift
in Friday-night-dream-never-land gone by
with lightning speed towards this early hour
de-boozed, black-caffeinated, strong and spry
and –mostly- to a fare-the-well cold shower`d.
The brakes gleam devilishly and I muse
Who`d pump this sea of Monday-morning blues?

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