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what good is in a man with no stand?
perplexed by the lines on his hand
chained in a long desserted way
losing hopes, how would he get away?

what good is in a man with no stand?
lost in a crossword land
enclosed in oveflowing questions
searching answers for better decisions

what good is in a man with no stand
like a black pebble on boracay's sand
separated by his own identity
black or white, which will he be?



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