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african morning
vultures gather on the roof
someone is sobbing


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The following comments are for "untitled"
by sahelsteve

Death in Haiku form,
You did a good job with the possibilities I see in this Haiku, Sahelsteve....ty,

Darlene

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: August 20, 2004 )

Steve/death
This one is stark. It gives an instant image with humanity tucked inside, loved it. huni.

( Posted by: Huni [Member] On: August 21, 2004 )

Great Great
Penelope, I agree. I read that somewhere, too. Sahelsteve, I like your haiku about Africa. Keep them coming.

( Posted by: peterpaulino [Member] On: August 27, 2004 )

titles
You're right Penelope, but in the face of peer pressure I have compromised my principles and started using titles. Basho and the masters had the advantage of not needing clear hyperlinks!

( Posted by: sahelsteve [Member] On: August 28, 2004 )





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