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With parting words and new forms of greeting,
A relation of sorts, though it has changed,
We see each other, memories fleeting,
The past and future distinctions arranged.
Figures of love that have withered and void,
To bring new forms, like a phoenix within,
Ashes of new built from pleasure destroyed,
We make amends, as we end and begin.
Could it be a friendship has been reclaimed?
Cupid navigates an eccentric track,
The arrow hits not where he first had aimed,
Though its effect had taken full attack.
To the war we call love; deem this a peace,
To save amity stale love is released.



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The following comments are for "Sonnet"
by Ilan Bouchard

sonnet
Excellent! It sounds like divorce, or maybe a reunion?

( Posted by: mzjen1 [Member] On: August 12, 2004 )

almost
Close. My ex-girlfriend, who's one of my best freinds, and I decided that our freindship was too strong for us to end after an unsuccessful relationship. I'm glad to say now that we're good freinds again.

( Posted by: Ilan Bouchard [Member] On: August 12, 2004 )

Sonnet
A thing of beauty. I adore it.

( Posted by: GibsonGirl [Member] On: October 28, 2004 )





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