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The tables turned twisted
Neglected, not nested they rested
Elderly ebonies,
fluently fighting for
evergreen endgamers

Attention attorneys:
Growing of gardens
could conceal a conquest
Your idle inspiration;
a hearts' hesitation

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The following comments are for "Ivory Isobars (re-post, re-edit)"
by DrKilldare

I want my jar of jam, damnit!
I swear i left it around here somewhere

( Posted by: shapeshifter [Member] On: August 11, 2004 )

Well, The Jar
is at the door, just pick it up when you leave... As always, you seem quite familiar, though I can't see exactly who you are. The jams yours anyway.

( Posted by: DrKilldare [Member] On: August 11, 2004 )

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