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Through the black of sky
Spirals spectacular greens,
Flowing flashing lights.

Her arms blow wildly,
Green and red then gone again
Covering the night.

Flashing faster than
The mind or film can capture,
She flows dim to bright.

Unnerving beauty
Of Aurora's bright halo
Lights my soul and sky.


The following comments are for "Illuminations"
by sixstrungout

Japanese Oscar
what a feat. Should win the Japanese Oscar for Haikus, if there is one.

( Posted by: Teflon [Member] On: August 10, 2004 )

LOL @ Teflon!!

Each a proper Haiku that all entwine so well! I printed this one off!

Alex :-)

( Posted by: londongrey [Member] On: August 11, 2004 )

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