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At the age of five, Elsa Gwyneth Graves was on the streets of Ralek one year after her parents abandoned her. The day she begged a Ralekian storekeeper for food, specifically a Ralekian sausage chain, twenty one year old spaceman Vilos Kilgore's eye was caught by the precious peasant and he said to himself within his own mind,
This child was without parents for a half decade. If anyone other than this greedy shopkeep is reluctant to accept her as a daughter, I will take the dejected child myself.
"Vilos," the storekeeper said. "Do take the child, and raise her like your own daughter. Someday Vilos my boy, it is you who shall make a great diktat, and as your daughter matures, she will be a formidable military commander."
"Indeed she will Eustace," Kilgore said. "Indeed she will."
From that moment on, Kilgore ruthlessly trained Elsa in special forces combat on his spare time and educated in the galactic ways and also taught her Earth history and galactic politics. Kilgore has made it official that Elsa must grow up and be educated in the Ralekian military. That way it would be easy for him to rise to power and build the former peasant girl into the future commander of all Ralek's military forces.

Eighteen years later, Vilos Kilgore was now supreme dictator of Ralek, the Abyss bomb was on its way to destroying the universe, and Elsa Graves was now far from the peasant who was last seen at Eustace Rosenberg's general store. Now the adopted daughter of Kilgore had graduated for Curalla University with her full masters in Political Science.
Her first battle planned was the battle of Pluto shortly before the exotic Ralekian step father destroyed the universe. With the universe destroyed, Elsa commanded her father's forces on the Martian remnants who have come to Pluto to spar against the beligerent Ralekian forces. Her secondary orders were to imprison a renowned grim Pyramidian scientist, a sexy Queroxian supermodel, and a shy, benevolent Gosnian android. Those three Pyramidian survivors were escorted to a asteroid constructed starship called "The Taliban Asteroid" as dubbed by Kilgore himself. Shortly, the Pyramidian escaped the asteroid clad carrier and retreated to a secretive refuge on the unknown territories of southeastern Pluto. This was the day the Martian soldier Phaedor and Earthman Carlton Guinness came to Pluto and became heroes as well as comrades among comrades in the sabotage of the bin Laden asteroid.

Personally, Elsa is extremely beautiful and attractive. She is even infatuated with Carlton Guinness and that is the cause of her prompt hatred towards the equally beautiful Queroxian model Olivion DeVries. These times Elsa even obsseses torturing and tormenting the glamorous Queroxian for the rest of the natural born life. But the many military officers and commanders in the Ralekian forces are even more infatuated with Elsa than Guinness himself. Her relationship with her father (and master) is a splendid one as that the way she and Kilgore like it.

Height: 5'11
Weight: 173 lbs.
Hair: Chessnut Brown
Eyes: Watermelon Red
Sex: Female
Age: 23
Homeworld: Ralek
Fighting Ability: Kickboxing (Can take on both Carlton Guinness and Phaedor)

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