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(Sorry About the latest one I was bored so I put a little edge on it. I guess it wasn't the best idea.)

I'm still waiting for someone like you to find me, to save me.
hold my hand and take me away for ever.
show me the way.
help me learn to be happy see to the positvie the better.
I'm not crazy, but sometimes I need someone to hold me and let me know that everything is okay.


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