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Dazzling sun blinds
steps crunching on ice and snow
one soul walks alone



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CJ Herlihy


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by CJHerlihy

CJ and one soul


CJ, this is nicely done! There's a good crisp image here and it paints a nice scene.

Keep writing these and read as much haiku as you can. I'm going to provide you with a link, soon...

~smile~

Melinda

( Posted by: Serenem [Member] On: August 10, 2004 )

a link, (or two)CJ
these are a couple of good links to study and read some great haiku!

http://simplyhaiku.com/



http://www.ahapoetry.com/haiartjr.htm

Regards,

Melinda

( Posted by: Serenem [Member] On: August 10, 2004 )





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