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What beauty there is in the death of a moonlit bed.
It lights afire with the glow of the sun, catching the very flames and making them surrendure to itís will. Shapes of devils swirl in the dawn air.
Another blue water day.
Clouds are scarce.
Clouds are the allie not comeing to the rescue.

His eyes are burning blue and odd green.
Mixed glass watching me, one blindly.
The sun reflects on his snowwhite tan.
His hair burns like dirty gold fire.
He is silent now, but he has a voice that shakes the Hevans to their foundations.

Angels sing as he smiles at me.
Bursting suns warm the cold heart of mine.
Lava flows as blood once did.
He moves the stars only for me.

Fingersí traceing the blood red cotton, then fold on a chest of ivory.

Let the leaves shake in anticipation, not me.
Let me give in to what the emotion is telling me.

Let me believe,

at least for a moment,

that this isnít just a daydream.

*Tell me what you think. Tell me if you know who I've been daydreaming about lately.*

"Dream the crow black dream."

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The following comments are for "A Daydream of Dawn"
by AbbyNormal

*looks over poem* Whoa, did not notice those.*blush* I'm I'll give you a hint:
He's a singer that first started in, I believe, the 70's maybe 60's and is still going

Thank you Clairesbest. You are always so kind to me.

e-mail me sometime. I'd love to hear from you.


( Posted by: AbbyNormal [Member] On: August 5, 2004 )

Uh, I don't have a picture to send you.heh. I have a scanner, I just have no clue how to use it.heh. If you can, send me one of you. Tell me what your oppinion is on Michael Moore.Just want to know.*giggle*


( Posted by: AbbyNormal [Member] On: August 5, 2004 )

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