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trapped in my confusion
of who I'll choose to be
escaping from the mirrir image
longing to be free

I watch with hesitation
as the winds pull me from my comfort
I feel like im faking happiness
I feel like im faking hurt

I am torn between
the righteous and corrupt
tied down by my emotions
with the water slowly going up

I can't force myself to smile
or force the tears to rise
afraid to show i'm outgoing
afraid to show i'm shy

with conviction I ask for strength
but I'm too susceptible to them
to this, to him, to everything
and I feel myself falling again

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