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It was on account of the TV
It was new in 1953
and died in 1973
It was balck and white
like me after she left

Saturday afternoon-summer
The choice was plain
Buy a color set
vanish into 1939

I chose a color set
another in a long long
line of sad regrets.

Love at all times!

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The following comments are for "1939"
by Lionel Gizik

Boob Tube...

The b/w was so basic...

Like the films of yesteryear...

All, a past era sorely missed...

Good subject and Well done...

( Posted by: daprdan [Member] On: August 5, 2004 )

Lionel .... more?
I get a feeling you can write. This is good and I went to find more. None! I'm crushed!! I'm holding out my bowl ........... huni.

( Posted by: Huni [Member] On: August 6, 2004 )

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