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Wired *


I am wired to you as
(electric).
Love: Your mess
work like shrouded poison
spilling into irretrievable sea
bloody with my paper thoughts
witness wetness into my dry in-betweens
is a rainbow, we layerlove; stir the impetuous cauldron
potion taste feathery shakes; like wire feelings
children of lovemakes tonight


your cue shone
brightly: blinding, blasting
covered reason
convincing the unbelievable kiss, my portion
is a touch boltjolt and ram at the impervious gap
your hands -- are lotion -- wirelike peripheral wakes
on my body as it flaps contortion; winged-hooks skylove
motion mention finding fluids
gyrate obsession warn me with utter wrecks
carry me beyond
(CAUTION)


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* Author's Note: Re-published to do away with the previous centering (justified layout) of this whole piece. Just a thought.

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Be daring, be different, be impractical, be anything that will assert integrity of purpose and imaginative vision against the play-it-safers, the creatures of the commonplace, the slaves of the ordinary. -- Sir Cecil Beaton (1904-1980) English photographer


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