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Gray sky creep of fog
shine of wet streets with puddles
like me all's somber


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CJ Herlihy


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The following comments are for "Rainy Day"
by CJHerlihy

rainy days
beautiful, beautiful...is all I can say
wished I had words so easy......
you had me slip sliding away....

( Posted by: coco [Member] On: August 10, 2004 )





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