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cold clear morning
my horse and I
exhale clouds


"I place these moments in my pocket
to be pulled
at the rush of noon,
the crush of three...
when tears come,
when words must learn to be enough..." MKL

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The following comments are for "horse clouds haiku"
by Serenem

exhaling clouds
spot on. this is one of the best haiku I have seen anywhere. i love it when you read a haiku first thing in the morning and it gives you an image to go through the day with. thanks.

( Posted by: sahelsteve [Member] On: August 26, 2004 )

Exhaling clouds

I'm so sorry that I lost your response to this! Thank you for reading and, moreso, for commenting... your thoughts mean more than I can say!

Steve, I am truly honored by your comments! Wow. Now YOU just made my day, sir!


Thank you!

Regards to you both,


( Posted by: Serenem [Member] On: August 26, 2004 )

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