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awake this night
sorting sorrows
the moon and I





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MKL

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"I place these moments in my pocket
to be pulled
at the rush of noon,
the crush of three...
when tears come,
when words must learn to be enough..." MKL


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The following comments are for "sorting sorrows"
by Serenem

Melinda-sorrows
I know which moment you are talking about here...
And why is it that the moon is always our companion? Very reliable moon!

Melinda, long or short you don't disappoint!

( Posted by: peterpaulino [Member] On: August 5, 2004 )

the moon and I
Serenem, this is simple yet holds so much feeling. As Peter stated, the moon always makes for a comforting companion.
Reba

( Posted by: Reba [Member] On: August 5, 2004 )

peter, reba and the moon
Hello!

Thank you both for reading this and for your thoughtful words. Yes, the moon often keeps me company and listens well to everything that I say.

~smile~

You all seem to do, as well...

I'm grateful!


Melinda

( Posted by: Serenem [Member] On: August 5, 2004 )

the mood is
To the music of "Just you and I" a romantic song from the 80's.

( Posted by: Teflon [Member] On: August 6, 2004 )

Melinda, I bow ..
Good, good, good. You caught a true Haiku moment and pinned it down. love this one. huni.

( Posted by: Huni [Member] On: August 6, 2004 )

whoa
thats awesome it flows like a river har

( Posted by: DEMONeyesBLUE [Member] On: August 7, 2004 )

Tef, Huni, Demoneyesblue


Tef, Ooooh, I like that song! Thank you! =0 }

Huni, You made me smile... love the triple goods!

DEMONeyes, you made my day with that comment, thank you!

Regards,

Serenem

( Posted by: Serenem [Member] On: August 7, 2004 )

title grabbed me
and the verse didn't let go... This poem is exquisite in both it's simplicity and the complex picture that you manage to paint in such an incredibly small space.. I think most haiku writers, myself included should be required to read this... it's pure art...

Bart

( Posted by: Bartleby [Member] On: August 13, 2004 )

Bart!


Thank you for reading this. I'm so thrilled with your praise! You are very kind.


~smile~

Melinda

( Posted by: Serenem [Member] On: August 13, 2004 )





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