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The boy in my class is very fat
He looks like a big fat ugly rat
I hope someday he goes splat
And turn in to a Florida water rat
And eaten by a house cat
And then he would be no more

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The following comments are for "Fat Boy from school"
by OpTiCaL

ok ya i know it is mean but i wrote this "poem" after he made fun of my acne, like most people in the world have acne but everyone in my class makes fun of my acne so this is my way of revenge . the bot julio is much disliked by his teachers, he is the FAT class clown. distubs class like every five minutes , adn calls people affencive name like "catpoop" , or "kittylitter".

( Posted by: OpTiCaL [Member] On: March 22, 2002 )

wow i should
wow i should try that!!!! that just might work!
that fat chubster will be so stunned he won't know what to do!

( Posted by: OpTiCaL [Member] On: March 24, 2002 )

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