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Here lie I, Martin Elginbrodde.
Hae mercy on my soul, Lord God,
As I wad dae were I Lord God,
And ye were Martin Elginbrodde.

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The following comments are for "Reminiscence"
by paxelius

A timemachine
will send you straight back to John Donnes times. I actually made the plans, and talked to a guy at the university. What are you going to say to him when you get there? "Our times are much better, join us for a trip to the 21st century" Would he enjoy the possibilities for pure worship in our times, do you think?
I liked your poem, agree with windchime. Wold give everyone something to think about, even the big guy...

( Posted by: DrKilldare [Member] On: August 11, 2004 )

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