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Dance with vortices,
Not just the gentle winds.

Do not listen only
But Hear...

Unchorused memories,
Of love triumphant,

Not just the silence
Of an unrequited love...

Feel and remember the depths,
Of your caring and love,

Offered...
Through out eternity,

That you may recognize it
When favored in kind...

------
Daniel Lloyd Kennedy


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The following comments are for "Of Vortices And Love"
by daprdan

Vortices
Windchime is very dilligent reposting her comments. But this is beautiful and it will be a shame to find this without an admirer. Well done, sir Dan!

( Posted by: peterpaulino [Member] On: August 3, 2004 )





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