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Even though the bonds of earth
Clutch...
At precious years remaining

Endless dreams of you
Obscure all logic...

Reaching out,
Hoping still...

That you
Remember my love,

Adrift...
Beyond the bounds of time

------
Daniel Lloyd Kennedy


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The following comments are for "Bonds Of Earth"
by daprdan

mmmm abstractedness
I love abstract pieces - especially when small tidbits of obviousness are thrown in too. Lovely piece, a pleasure to read, will definitely have to take time and read some more of your pieces.

( Posted by: De`esse [Member] On: August 3, 2004 )

Daniel Lloyd Kenedy!!
No more rhymes? Just as I get started you stop? Well I'm glad, this is lovely and my favourite style. huni.

( Posted by: Huni [Member] On: August 4, 2004 )

Well Uhhh...
De`esse, I hope my other works can live up to your expectations...

Claire, where would the world be without anticipation?

Huni, I've not forsaken my poesque nature... But, I like the break from R/R/T, and this style lets me be more open and make statements... I called them ramblings and have a file of them... They inspire me in my normal R/R/T, but here I can use them and they nearly write themselves...

( Posted by: daprdan [Member] On: August 4, 2004 )





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