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The same old fly spots
Ah! but new cockroaches
country town cafe.

Not the poem which we have read, but that to which we return, with the greatest pleasure, possesses the power and claims the name of essential poetry.

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by huni

On Cafe...
Proprietor be damned...

( Posted by: daprdan [Member] On: August 3, 2004 )

Ah, so!
Most delightful haiku - funny, transitory, comfortable, just right!

( Posted by: gomarsoap [Member] On: August 4, 2004 )

thanks Dan, gomar, claire
Andy asked for road trip Haiku and this is my second. Spider being the first. I have one more ready but they are just getting gorier. lol. Why is outback travel so ..... earthy? I did a big trip, with my parents 10 years back, up the centre of Australia, ending at my uncles cattle station, so I'm drawing on my diary for these. 3 down 22 to go. huni

( Posted by: Huni [Member] On: August 4, 2004 )

Oh, it's gone. What did I say then? Okay, I remember saying I can identify you through your haiku. And what else?... I'll just say something new: I like road trip, and you justified a picture of one with just three lines, amazing!

( Posted by: PETERPAULINO [Member] On: August 4, 2004 )

1/2 oz Kahlua
1/2 oz Drambuie

Pour into a shot glass, mix and drink a la Tequila, and then try singing La Cucaracha.

( Posted by: Teflon [Member] On: August 10, 2004 )

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