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Languid sleepy limbs,
Half lidded ambience,
Reality slightly blurred.
Flesh quivers with anticipation…
Rises and responds to touch.
Dissociative understanding…
Falling into wealth of trust,
Spiralling outward –
Mingling space and time.
Returning to sharp, shapes and light
Unwilling of movement,
Reluctant of spirit
Laying prose with replete
Curved satisfaction.

(A/N: Believe it or not, inspired by the chiropractor....)

"I'm not an artist - I'm a f*%king work of art!"
- Marilyn Manson: (S)aint

"Hold the 'S' because I am an 'aint'"
- Marilyn Manson: (S)aint

"If at first you don't succeed, you're about average... I HATE being average."
- Adam Best

"One must either be a work of art, or wear one."
- Oscar Wilde

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The following comments are for "Trust"
by De`esse

Liked this, Deesse. "Returning to sharp, shapes and light". Pleasant, soothing poem..

( Posted by: DrKilldare [Member] On: July 28, 2004 )

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