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Fly to me, little children of the dark
Look, I show you all of what you do not have
In this void you know my mark
I have put the hopeful gleam into your eyes
Come to me, captivated though you be.

Flock to this spot, little souls of the night
Watch the wondrous visions dance in your mind
In this nothingness you welcome my light
I give you hope of something beyond
Others say I am not what I seem, yet still you dream.

Come to me, little creatures of fragility
Listen, I speak of untainted existence
And, oppressed, you gladly believe my reality
Smiling, I welcome all of you, but do not doubt
I am real, I can, much as you, feel

Closer, closer, answering the call
Thoughts of glorious secrets fill your head
Flash of pain and now you fall
Laughing I watch your lifeless form descend
What fools.

Stay metal!

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The following comments are for "The Mark of I"
by xitwound117

the mark
if i read this correctly, your intention is abstract illustration. however, it is so abstract that i cannot get my arms around it.please help me to understand better. thanks.

( Posted by: williamhill [Member] On: July 29, 2004 )

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