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My studies in Speculative philosophy, metaphysics, and science are all summed up in the image of a mouse called man running in and out of every hole in the Cosmos hunting for the Absolute Cheese. Benjamin DeCasseres


wind-dusk is a connotation, a breakaway flare
opting somewhat versus somehow, you burn with flair

you glide, dance, misstep on me
flooring my poetry, send-clouds them to dreams

to paper-blunder my pen-stroked luck; don't-get-stuck-struck
an accidental beauty, a sudden Pollack

splattered canopies of words
colorful suspended clothes called syntax

worldly addiction of diction;
between the letters are planets of punctuations

protecting the thin filament of our soul
as eyes read the wander-wonder-wanderlust

full of imageries; stopnot! at the writer's Black Hole
don't fall out of the inescapable,

but zoom into the light!

so branch out your words
grip~gripping~branchy~layers~gripevine~forested~mind~

you are a carpeted fabric, we love to weave: to tell dreams,
catch air, build cosmos, oh-fly... wondercreate!

nevermind hasty missteps,
your verbose suspension glides, dances smoothly

as a sunrise, like first-time kisses;
you blew me away in wild abandon

wind-dusk is a breakaway flare, a connotation,
opting, burning, flairing notion


anti-gravity somehow you are somewhat:
Sir, Poignance, you radiate permanence!

------
Be daring, be different, be impractical, be anything that will assert integrity of purpose and imaginative vision against the play-it-safers, the creatures of the commonplace, the slaves of the ordinary. -- Sir Cecil Beaton (1904-1980) English photographer


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by Idomis

Wow!
I had a really good read. Thank you.

( Posted by: Ingi [Member] On: July 28, 2004 )

Universe
I am just a reader here, not qualified to comment on such a wonderful poetry! Idomis, you are very intelligent and sometimes I honestly couldn't catch up, you are Cebuano right? Well one of your fiction gave me this hint. I love your writing and if only I can have one day to just focus on all of them, I would. Thanks.

( Posted by: peterpaulino [Member] On: July 29, 2004 )

Idomis
Hey, come on, join the thread!

( Posted by: peterpaulino [Member] On: July 29, 2004 )





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