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What is this feeling,
lost,
lonely,
despair,
without,
empty,
will it disappear,
will it leave,
please leave,
no longer in need of this feeling,
can not make it go away,
why not,
is it here to stay,
NO!
It must leave,
it is not welcome,
overcome,
succumb,
drive away,
conquer,
suppress,
outdo,
this is what need to be done to drive this feeling away from my mind,
body,
spirit,
heart,
soul,
courage to overcome this must take over.

------
Jeffrey Lawson


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