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In times of sorrow,
In times of pain ,
In times I do not feel I am worth the stay,
In times I feel like I can no longer go on,
In times I feel the world on my shoulders,
When I feel the blues are my brothers ,
I have you by my side.

What should I do?
What should I say?
What should I write?
A poem is all I will do,
Appreciating the comfort you brought me.


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