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Early morning Saturday,
Must be eight or nine
I am kinetic and fanatic
For a zaftig flame of mine.

I watch her till I’m catatonic,
I’m on cloud nine.
I say, “My love’s platonic,
I say, “My name’s Teflon,”
She’s coquetting, I’m supersonic,
To my gorgeous Miss Yvonne.

I asked Jambi, Dotti, Chairry,
They live on Sunset and Vine:
“She loves Chocolate, liqueur cherry.”
I showered her with flowers,
I became her Valentine.

I took her from PeeWee Herman,
On TV to everyone
I said “We are the couple,
Me and Miss Yvonne.”

Gracefully she answered: “Hello, Teflon,”-
My queen, she’s so delicious.
I keep her on a throne,
I love when she’s capricious,
My lady Miss Yvonne.

On Rodeo I buy her dresses,
Her leash a mobile phone
My gym’s on Venice Beach
She loves my muscle tone.
She speaks, she charms, she dazzles,
Oh, my classy Miss Yvonne.




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The following comments are for "Me and Miss Yvonne"
by Teflon

Teflon's Yvonne
'Swap his mon to buy Yvonne what she need-o,
Son-of-a-gun we'll have big fun on the bayou!'

I like the fresh air this poem breathes, Teflon. I picture your Yvonne as someone like Reese Witherspoon, I dunno if you like her.

( Posted by: peterpaulino [Member] On: July 27, 2004 )

Peter, who's Reese Witherspoon?
Maybe I like her, in the context of being as elegant as THE Miss Yvonne.

( Posted by: teflon [Member] On: July 27, 2004 )

Yvonne
The originality of these rhymes made me smile. I am so damn prejudiced against rhyming poetry that I can't believe you actually made me enjoy this. Good job.

( Posted by: Saratin [Member] On: July 27, 2004 )

Happy to entertain Saratin
I am prejudiced too, against conceited and preaching rhyming. I try to be naughty.

( Posted by: teflon [Member] On: July 27, 2004 )

Teflon's Yvonne
Reese W starred in Legally Blonde I and II. As a child actress, she appeared in Man In The Moon. Very pretty if not as pretty as your Yvonne!

( Posted by: peterpaulino [Member] On: July 27, 2004 )

Reese With A Spoon
Did a Yahoo Image search. The face is familiar. Pretty, though far from the 50's glamorous look of Miss Yvonne.

( Posted by: teflon [Member] On: July 28, 2004 )

Your Yvonne the Sweetest One
O, yeah! I'd like to meet your sweet Yvonne. Again thanks for this nice poetry, did I say I like the style of rhyming too? Is there a particular name for this form?

( Posted by: peterpaulino [Member] On: July 28, 2004 )

If you watched her
If you ever have been a PW Herman addict, you would have picked up the playfulness of the show and created a song about someone there, or Miss Yvonne. No name for the form.

( Posted by: Teflon [Member] On: July 28, 2004 )





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